Open Poetry #7 |
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Beautiful Blue |
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PoetasterD Junior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 42Florida |
Many times I have gazed into the depths of blue hoping to catch a glimpse of the treasures below Longing to discover what secrets lie buried under the beautiful blue Though I try I see not what lies below for the storm driven waves, opaque, the surface make Only blurry images of distorted treasures I see under the beautiful blue Hours I spend praying for an end to the depression that feeds the storm driven waves rolling in Only to obscure my view of the treasure under the beautiful blue Helpless to intervene I can only watch and hope as ripples grow to waves never ending The storm far off reaches here even still under the beautiful blue But alas I see a break in the cloudy sky as calm slowly replaces the waves For one brief moment I can see below under the beautiful blue And as I peer ever deeper into the depths what wondrous treasures to me are revealed By rays of sunshine reflected back at me under the beautiful blue And though I long to explore the depths I fear the ripple I may cause That would steal the beauty I appreciate so under the beautiful blue |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very, very impressive! So much can be read into this poem. The metaphors and double-entendres are really used well. I would be proud to write this one. Excellent work... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
impressive indeed... amazing imagery in this... both of visual and emotional wonderful wording and phrasing very well written take a bow for this one PoetTD ![]() take care, jm I think I could need - this in my life I think I'm just scared - that I know too much I can't relate and that's a problem I'm feeling ... If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move If you're gone - baby you need to come home cuz there's a little bit of something me... In everything in you. ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetTD~ How artfully presented are your thoughts. The emotions run deep 'under the beautiful blue'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This poem brings so many things to mind, longing, dreaming, wishing, and the frear that when you get what you want it loses its charm. |
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PoetasterD Junior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 42Florida |
Thank you all for such gracious comments! It is one thing to have the person who inspired your poem compliment you, and quite another to have such well versed (pun intended) poets compliment you. Thank you, thank you! Great wishes, Poetaster D |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I'm sinking in the Beautiful Blue of your words....A lovely weave of words!!! Thank you for sharing this! |
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