Open Poetry #7 |
For Wes |
Dragon's Soul Junior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 25 |
In the end we all fly free Break our chains and spread our wings From this earth we all soar away I can't wait for that beautiful day When I see him and he sees me Then he'll know I'll never stray And I'll find you and there we'll stay Under God's great reign forever and a day |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DS~ Welcome! this is very nice! -SEA |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Touching. I loved this. Welcome to Passions. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome to Passions! This is a beautifully written piece straight from your heart, I hope you'll stick around and post more! [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 06-05-2000).] |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Welcome to passions! That was a lovely poem! Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading much more of your poetry/stories. "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Rhavin Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 28 |
I like this a lot. I wish you would have let me hear it when you first wrote it. Very touching. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
I really enjoyed this piece! I hope to read more from you real soon. "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special message. |
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Dragon's Soul Junior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 25 |
Thank you all for all of you're replies more than I expected and thank you Poet deVine for the card. Rhavin we both know those times were tough and i wish i would have shown you sooner |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Welcome to Passions, Dragon's Soul! Lovely piece here - well, I can wait for those days, but I do look forward to soaring - free ~netswan |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Welcome, this was very nice. Since my real name is Wes I found it rerisitable to read. |
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