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Dream On Dreamy Dreams!
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Dream On Dreamy Dreams! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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Dreamy eyes, from the Nile Lips spouting, beautiful smile, O my lady, my dear Kyle, Love's blooming deep inside. As I sigh, a feeling so deep, Your being away makes me weep, Without your dream, I cannot sleep, Your face takes me in a sweep. Dreamy eyes, from the Nile, Lips spouting, beautiful smile, O my lady, my dear Kyle, Love's blooming deep inside. Close my eyes, feeling you, Sensing your touch, Kissing softly, quivering lips, Feeling blessed ever so much. Darling Angel, from the Nile, Cheeks flushing, lovely blue eyes, O my queen, my dear from the Nile, Love blooming, so beautiful - your smile. Caress your hair, trembling ever so, Taking a deep breath, Moving so quietly, slow steps, Feeling nervous, all too much. Darling Angel, from the Nile, Cheeks flushing, lovely blue eyes, O my queen, my dear from the Nile, Love blooming, so beautiful - your smile. Slipping my hands, entwined in yours, Abundance of nervous energy, Passion filled heart, rapid beats, As I fell off my couch, there ends a dream. ----meant to be a song from the heart, ended up as a poetry from the soul--- |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ This one is soft and lilting. Nice thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful poetry of the soul! Denise |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Nicely written piece from your soul~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marge, Denise and Marie, Thanks from the bottom of my heart for your comments. regards - sudhir |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Did you really fall off the couch!!!LOL... too cute... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Hi, Sudhir! Nicely written. Well did you really fall off the couch? ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sudhir~ My friend this was breathtaking and oh so dreamy. and I want to know to...did you fall off your couch??? (ouch)  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
poem or song...works either way for me... and either way is delightful wonderful rhyme in this Sud... you write very well ... for someone who just fell  later-poet-gator jm There are places inside our souls ... that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts ... that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Karilea, Lorraine, Tracie, Janet, Thanks for reading and posting your wonderful replies. Ouch that hurt, I did fall off from my dream couch.... Thanks once again... Regards, sudhir |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...but a dream to stay in and never awaken from...here's hoping all your dreams come true |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sudhir,...this here poem felt so light and airy while I was reading it. Wonderful writing. Thank you for sharing. *Peace. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ruth, Thanks for reading and posting. More thanks for the wishes that you send with your wonderful response... Spitfire, Thank You for reading. regards, sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
It's a pleasure to share your softly woven dream Sudhir, even if you did wake me up rather abruptly at the end (LOL) ... lovely work! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Kit, thanks a lot to you, sorry for the abrupt wake-up call, though Many regards, sudhir |
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