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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Illusion is what I feel now My heart is empty after your revelation Submerged in the sea of pain Only to find myself gasping for a breath of air I will never forget you you're my first love I had all the best moments in life with you I feel all worst feelings now You've made your choice Just carry on with life To look back is a dangerous thing You're happy now and that's all you need I'll never say again what all I wanted To feel you beside me when I get up every morning To see your smile and begin my day Raise a family with you Hopes are all slashed but I hope that I'll live to see another beautiful dawn I'm not mad at you for what you did May be you did the right thing All I say is never look back Please, it'll break my heart I've built walls before you came I kept myself in my own world and never felt before You gave me a secure feeling of love I don't feel like that anymore Never will I feel the same as being with you,but still I thank you for being with me and all I say is Never look back and stay happy wherever you're Sincerely A_L |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Amazon, the expression here just clawed at my heart. Very nice poem!  Coco |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Amazon_Lover,....oh ouch. This is so heartfelt and so wonderfully written. Such an outpour of emotions. So real and so amazing the way you showed us that. Thank you for such a great read. *Peace. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
A_L, I can see the cracks in your broken heart. Oh how sad this is. I can feel the emotions you must have felt, my friend. The right one will come along some day....you just have to be patient. Wonderful writing. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
AL~ Oh how you wrote my heart with this one. you tore at my heart but the pain and these feelings need to be felt in order to work through it all. the ending of love can be so cruel and it can feel like we will never see another tomorrow. i am glad to see you can write your feelings. i wish you much love and healing during this difficult time. take care and god bless ya. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Thanks Amy I feel too much of pain pondering what went wrong. I love her so much and sometimes she acts strangely and makes me feel lost. But still she's my best friend and she'll always be. Thanks A_L |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Hi Amazon - what a beautiful heart wretching poem and how you are showing true love by letting her fly free - Love is tough. Time will heal it, but sometimes time just goes too slowly. ~netswan |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Thanks netswan she makes, me do everything. I'm letting her free and it does pain me but I feel happy knowing that it's what she wants. Sincerely A_L |
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