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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Star of my heart, life and light Hear my gentle prayer this night Cast your glow on my love's heart And let her know, we'll never part Since into my life she came She's chased the clouds and rain She's made my days worth living And touched me with her giving Tender angel from above Thank you today for her love I am offering thanks that she Has given her love to me ----------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
how tender and romantic! Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sven I must say most of your poems over the last few days have been quite romantic, so has the love bug bitten? I must apologise but I am just been a lonely and bitter single person LOL. a beautiful poem/prayer. heavenly. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I guess there has to be one relentless romantic in the bunch! Your poetry flows sir... excellent poem!  |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Aahhh Sven,...once again. You have written some beautiful poetry. This is a lovely, lovely piece. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sven you romantic you! very beautiful indeed.  Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Yet another good poem from,Sevn.Keep it up.Enjoyed it!!!!!! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
As usual another sighing poem. Your loving heart is so sweet Sven!! Wonderful I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Amen to your prayer and beautiful poem/prayer it was. Your poems make me smile. Thanks, marcy |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Oh Sven... This touched something in me. I really like it. Thanks for sharing this. MBlue |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ You've got the most romantic nature and it shows in everything you write. A gentle heart is what I see. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Sven~ Lovely, absolutely lovely. ~Lorraine~ A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
i have to agree with Brian here......anything you want to tell us????? Your poetry has definitely been very romantic lately?? Well, who am I to ask.....  Marina [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 06-04-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all again. . . Irish Rose, thank you. . . brian, almost all of my poetry is like this. . .I'm just a hopeless Romantic, the "King of Romance" as my fellow Passions poets have dubbed me!! deVine, you know it!! That's me. . . the "Relentless Romantic"!! LOL spitfire, you're welcome, glad that you liked it. . . DA, always my friend. . . vandana, thank you very much. . . Isis, thank you, here's a smile for you! Alle'cram, thank you, glad that I could make your day in some small way. . . Magnolia, you're welcome, and thank you. . . Marge, thank you. . . it is my nature to be romantic, I know no other way. . . Lorriane, thank you!! Marina, I could tell you, but then. . . I'd have to kill you!! LOL ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, Wonderful, Wonderful you write such lovely poems. Cerenity |
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