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Sven
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0 posted 2000-06-04 05:35 PM


Star of my heart, life and light
Hear my gentle prayer this night
Cast your glow on my love's heart
And let her know, we'll never part

Since into my life she came
She's chased the clouds and rain
She's made my days worth living
And touched me with her giving

Tender angel from above
Thank you today for her love
I am offering thanks that she
Has given her love to me

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2000-06-04 05:40 PM


how tender and romantic!

 Kathleen
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brian madden
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2 posted 2000-06-04 05:49 PM


Sven I must say most of your poems over the last few days have been quite romantic, so has the love bug bitten? I must apologise but I am just been a lonely and bitter single person LOL.

a beautiful poem/prayer. heavenly.  


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3 posted 2000-06-04 05:58 PM


I guess there has to be one relentless romantic in the bunch! Your poetry flows sir... excellent poem!  
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4 posted 2000-06-04 06:13 PM


~Aahhh Sven,...once again.  You have written some beautiful poetry.  This is a lovely, lovely piece. Thank you for sharing it.
Dark Angel
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5 posted 2000-06-04 06:18 PM


Sven you romantic you! very beautiful indeed.  

 Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain."
I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow
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6 posted 2000-06-04 07:19 PM


Yet another good poem from,Sevn.Keep it up.Enjoyed it!!!!!!
Isis
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7 posted 2000-06-04 07:36 PM


As usual another sighing poem.  Your loving heart is so sweet Sven!!  Wonderful  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
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Alle'cram
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8 posted 2000-06-04 07:54 PM


Amen to your prayer and beautiful poem/prayer it was. Your poems make me smile. Thanks, marcy
MagnoliaBlue
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9 posted 2000-06-04 07:55 PM


Oh Sven...

This touched something in me. I really like

it.

Thanks for sharing this.

MBlue  

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10 posted 2000-06-04 08:38 PM


Sven~
You've got the most romantic nature
and it shows in everything you write.
A gentle heart is what I see.
~*Marge*~


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Lorraine Nisbet
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11 posted 2000-06-04 08:47 PM



Sven~

Lovely, absolutely lovely.

~Lorraine~

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur


Marina
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12 posted 2000-06-04 09:39 PM


i have to agree with Brian here......anything you want to tell us?????  
Your poetry has definitely been very romantic lately??   Well, who am I to ask.....

Marina


[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 06-04-2000).]

Sven
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13 posted 2000-06-05 12:27 PM


Thank you all again. . .

Irish Rose, thank you. . .

brian, almost all of my poetry is like this. . .I'm just a hopeless Romantic, the "King of Romance" as my fellow Passions poets have dubbed me!!  

deVine, you know it!!  That's me. . . the "Relentless Romantic"!!  LOL    

spitfire, you're welcome, glad that you liked it. . .

DA, always my friend. . .

vandana, thank you very much. . .

Isis, thank you, here's a smile for you!  

Alle'cram, thank you, glad that I could make your day in some small way. . .

Magnolia, you're welcome, and thank you. . .

Marge, thank you. . . it is my nature to be romantic, I know no other way. . .

Lorriane, thank you!!

Marina, I could tell you, but then. . . I'd have to kill you!!  LOL  

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Cerenity
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14 posted 2000-06-05 09:05 AM


Hi Sven,

Wonderful, Wonderful you write such lovely poems.

Cerenity

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