Open Poetry #7 |
Mid-Summer's Heat |
Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
~ ~ ~ Early dawning uncurling tender leaf, and opening sweet bud bursting through the barren bark in rising heat of midsummer’s new life springing. Canadian geese honk, circling overhead in croaking conversation, to and from the warm lake where they’re still feeding and nurturing their half-grown young. We know that no one wants to cook toward the end of this scorching steaming dried-grass day; so in a curtain-laced golden kitchen the crock pot begins, with fresh cool water, plump beans, red meat, pepper medley, fragrant chives, and cumin - a different brand of heat. This day has three. Late in the day, scents of spices linger and wander, as afternoon rides a long teeter-totter across dappled sunlit meadows; and through the humming cicadas our soft fleshed moans and fires melt and meld us, as one brilliant ripened crimson canna plunges from the rich moist earth to meet the sun; pungent aromas rising in passion’s breezes... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ I open my eyes... and across the bed, you peek through your long lashes; “isn’t this heat awful?” you murmur, and I nod, becoming aware that it was just another broiling summer’s luscious dream. You sleepily reach out a slender, long dear finger, and we hold fingers for the seconds until they sweat - when we let go, smiling soft smiles into each others’ souls. Another day . . . there will be. ~ ~ ~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My gosh---this is lovely...Rosemary, loved the mood of this---left me a bit envious...love as sure as cycles of nature...someone is lucky indeed--grins.... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I think I used all my senses in reading this lovely verse Rosemary! I could see the landscape, hear the cicadas, smell the spices (taste the crock pot contents), and feel the touch of the hand. What a wonderful poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed muchly. Nicely written and expressed. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
ya little devil! This is a great poem - it made use of some wonderful similes and metaphors - you must have worked on this poem a long time for it to come out so clean and great. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rosemary--so lucious...and lovely is your finger-holding and your mid summer dreams!! |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Oh Rosemary I could picture it and it awoke all of the senses. Great read. Thanks for sharing. MagnoliaBlue |
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