navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #7 » risks
Open Poetry #7
Post A Reply Post New Topic risks Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
eclipse29
New Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 4


0 posted 2000-06-03 01:35 PM


to look into your eyes
is to risk the confusion
from the look returned
to breath your scent
is to risk the oblivion
in which i am taken
to feel your warmth
is to risk the pain
from falling in love
to speak your name
is to risk the silence
that will be returned
to think your thoughts
is to risk the atmosphere
in which i am alone
to be your friend
is to risk the wall
that is placed before me
to miss your smile
is to risk the tears
that flow down my cheaks
to dream your kiss
is to risk the reality
that you do not love me
to want your love
is to risk a promise
that will never be kept


© Copyright 2000 eclipse29 - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-06-03 01:39 PM


~Whoa,...I am impressed.  Truly.  "Welcome, welcome" .....looking forward to more of your work. Take care *Peace.
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-06-03 02:19 PM


Welcome to the family! Excellent poem...I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome.  
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-06-03 04:33 PM


Eclipse~
Welcome to Passion's !

Without risk ... there is no chance for gain.
Go for it.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Lorraine Nisbet
Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218
Jersey City, NJ USA
4 posted 2000-06-03 06:58 PM



Hi eclipse99,

Wow... and a big welcome.

~Lorraine

 
A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur


Rose Petal
Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 52
WVa. USA
5 posted 2000-06-03 11:02 PM


Oh my, I feel you are me, wow, I loved your poem! welcome to passions! loved it!!!!!!!
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #7 » risks

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary