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fractal007
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0 posted 2000-06-02 07:56 PM


The Girl

She comes to you with a look of vision in her face.
You can see all your fantasies in her eyes.

She looks into the mirror of your soul,
Her body a reflection of all your previous dreams.

In that empty room, she stares blankly at you.
Blankly.

Yours and her minds join to become one mass of exstatic nothingness.


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Fractal007~ this is a cool one!   -SEA
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Sometimes all it takes is a look!
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