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Honeybee
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0 posted 2000-06-02 07:49 PM




~GOD'S TEARS HAIKU~

5-7-5

God's tears of joy fall
softly upon my window pane
sweet heavenly rain

*By Melissa Honeybee*

© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-06-02 07:51 PM


Melissa~ I really like this one a lot!   -SEA
Honeybee
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2 posted 2000-06-02 08:36 PM


  
Thank you so much SEA!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

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3 posted 2000-06-02 08:42 PM


This is a unique perspective! You are so good at these, Melissa!  

Denise

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Thank you Denise!  I love writing haikus, senryus and tankas.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

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