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~Rain Dream Haiku~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~RAIN DREAM HAIKU~ 5-7-5 Soft rain serenades, filling my soul with rapture as I dream of you *By Melissa Honeybee* |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Melissa~ this felt like love wrapping it's arms around me. I happen to love rain.  -SEA |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you for the compliment SEA! I love rain as well, listening to it's soothing melody at night, and then writing about it (I love to analyze rain and personify it). I should repost my other haikus on rain for you.  Take care, Melissa Honeybee [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-02-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful dream, Melissa! Denise |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
That was quite a good poem. Rain is cool, people should write more about it! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lovely little Haiku Melissa you have done well, keep dreaming those lovely dreams Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ You've captured a lovely thought. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Melissa, oh queen oh Haikus. Another wonderful one, looking forward to the next one. I love soft sunny rain with aclear blue sky especially when it is too hot out. ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Melissa.......This is wonderful. I love it, and I love the rain. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Amazing to fill such a lovely thought with so little words ... wonderful Melissa! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you everyone for the compliments and for the support! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
such beauty in such few words, Melissa. I am truly in awe of your talent. *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thanks Krista, and I am in awe of your talent as well! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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