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rene
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0 posted 2000-06-01 01:26 PM


we cannot be forgot
winter will not be so bleak

stranger push through
the rotted ground
Remember
when we tasted each other
in the open sunshine

flesh turns
to flowers


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Parker
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1 posted 2000-06-02 01:20 AM


rene, there is just so much about this little piece that I liked.

This line...

Remember
when we tasted each other
in the open sunshine

conjurs up a few old and very sweet memories.

Parker

rene
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2 posted 2000-06-02 07:57 PM


cheers parker. the other 4 are somewhere back there
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