Open Poetry #7 |
Waiting |
Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Sitting- Under the silver moon Wondering if you’re alright Listening- Here in silence Alone in the still of the night Worrying- Like a friend would do Caring in every way Waiting- For you to tell me Tell me everything’s Okay Silently- I look for you But you I do not see Wondering- Is it possible Have you forgotten me? Patiently- I sit waiting As time passes by Emotions- Running wild And I ask my self, Why? Why- Must I sit here And worry like I do Despair- I could go with out But I care too much for you Sitting- I wait patiently Drowning with concern Wishing- Upon the stars For you to soon return < !signature--> ~Sheri [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 06-02-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I know what it is like to miss a loved one, one of of closest friends moved to Australia abd not a day goes by that I don't think of her. really enjoyed yor poem, well written. Why- Must I sit here And worry like I do Despair- I could go with out But I care too much for you Sitting- I wait patiently Drowning with concern Wishing- Upon the stars For you to soon return ------------------------ "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Libraries gave us power Then work came and made us free What price now for a shallow piece of dignity" Nicky Wire, A design for Life. manic street preachers "Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany Culture, alienation, boredom and despair" |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Irie, Hope that you hear from your loved one soon. It is hard to sit there wondering if they are okay and why they have not called at least. Best wishes to you...hope it all works out. Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
It is one of the hardest things in the world, sitting around waiting and wondering. You've expressed that well, Irie! Denise |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Brian, LW, Denise, I too hope that I hear something soon. Very soon! I don't like to be left hanging, it's no fun! Thank you for your replies! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Irie, it is hard when you get shut out or don't know what's going on. . . I know. . . Excellent poem, my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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