Open Poetry #7 |
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The Purest Of Love Not Of This World |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California ![]() |
The Purest Of Love Not Of This World My love does sore to the hight’s of heavens gate in your behalf. My heart burst its brims in delight with dreams of anticipation of your presence. My spirit floats among the stars with gitty’ness at the sight of you. If but for a moment I could share with the world this feeling of ecstasy, pure joy, matched by nothing upon the face of the earth. We love each other with no limits as is the stars in the heavens above, and this unity so profound it gives a glimpse of the heavens as in mans dreams. I in sheer bliss understand love and its only because its with you. If but for a moment I could share with the world this feeling of ecstasy, pure joy, match by nothing upon the face of the earth. Our love is not limited in any way know to man, for we have soared well beyond the boundaries ever laid out. I put my heart and soul on the line with absolutely no fear of lose, and you too show this by your every move towards me. If but for a moment I could share with the world this feeling of ecstasy, pure joy, matched by nothing upon the face of the earth. Our hearts shall never perish for this kind of love never dies, but goes on in to eternity and finds it mark among the stars, and there for the world will know of the most purest of love because it will be insight for all to see among the stars. So I have told the world of a love matched by nothing upon the face of the earth for it resides in the stars just look up and there you will see it. By, Cerenity [This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 04-26-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely thoughts in this, Cerenity! Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
dittoing denise... |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
I love this poem..... How true ![]() Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
What a love to find!!! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi everyone, Thank you for your kind replys, Cerenity |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
~~nice poem Cerenity~~~ A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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LoveBug![]()
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A beautiful poem about a beautiful love. Great job. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
What can I say to this!!! You're so goooooooood in expressing your feelings!! It's the best feeling that anyone can desire. "To love and to be loved" I'm sure your love will come true. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wonderful, Cerenity! A treasure of a poem Liz |
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Jeffrey Carter![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Man! How did I miss this? I'm glad I found it! This is beautifully crafted. All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi: Danny,Love Bug,amazon_lover,Liz,Jeffrey I have to say that of all the poems I have written thus far, this would have to my least favorire one, or at least I did not feel it was very good. So I guess I am very suprized to see that you seem to like it. I am very happy though that you all do and very grateful for your kind replys. Thank you so much, Love Cerenity |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! |
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