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Cerenity
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0 posted 2000-04-20 01:10 PM



The Purest Of Love Not Of This World


My love does sore to the hight’s
of heavens gate in your behalf.
My heart burst its brims in delight
with dreams of anticipation of your
presence. My spirit floats among the
stars with gitty’ness at the sight
of you.

If but for a moment I could share
with the world this feeling of ecstasy,
pure  joy,  matched by nothing
upon the face of the earth.

We love each other with no limits
as is the stars in the heavens above, and
this unity so profound it gives a glimpse of
the heavens as in mans dreams. I in sheer
bliss understand love and its only
because its with you.

If but for a moment I could share
with the world this feeling of ecstasy,
pure  joy, match by nothing
upon the face of the earth.

Our love is not limited in any way
know to man, for we have soared well
beyond the boundaries ever laid out. I put
my heart and soul on the line with absolutely
no fear of lose, and you too show this by
your every move towards me.

If but for a moment I could share
with the world this feeling of ecstasy,
pure  joy, matched by nothing
upon the face of the earth.


Our hearts shall never perish for
this kind of love never dies, but goes on
in to eternity and finds it mark among the
stars, and there for the world will know
of the most purest of love because it
will be insight for all to see
among the stars.


So I have told the world of a love matched by
nothing upon the face of the earth
for it resides in the stars just
look up and there you will
see it.

By,  Cerenity



[This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 04-26-2000).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-04-20 02:48 PM


Lovely thoughts in this, Cerenity!

Denise

Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-04-20 03:13 PM


dittoing denise...
Cuddlez
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3 posted 2000-04-25 11:49 PM


I love this poem..... How true )

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tulip
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4 posted 2000-04-26 12:21 PM


What a love to find!!!  
Cerenity
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5 posted 2000-04-26 09:22 AM


Hi everyone,

Thank you for your kind replys,

Cerenity

Danny Holloway
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6 posted 2000-04-26 11:09 AM


~~nice poem Cerenity~~~

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.


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7 posted 2000-04-26 11:15 AM


A beautiful poem about a beautiful love. Great job.

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

amazon_lover
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8 posted 2000-04-26 02:15 PM


What can I say to this!!!
You're so goooooooood in expressing your feelings!!
It's the best feeling that anyone can desire.
"To love and to be loved"
I'm sure your love will come true.

Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 2000-04-26 03:33 PM


Wonderful, Cerenity!
A treasure of a poem
Liz

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10 posted 2000-04-27 01:24 AM


Man! How did I miss this?
I'm glad I found it! This is beautifully crafted.

All my love,
Jeffrey

 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams,
but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep

Cerenity
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11 posted 2000-04-27 08:46 AM


Hi: Danny,Love Bug,amazon_lover,Liz,Jeffrey

I have to say that of all the poems I have written thus far, this would have to my least favorire one, or at least I did not feel it was very good. So I guess I am very suprized to see that you seem to like it. I am very happy though that you all do and very grateful for your kind replys.

Thank you so much,

Love  Cerenity

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12 posted 2004-05-13 03:31 AM


excellent!
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