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Corazon
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 1209

0 posted 2000-06-01 05:08 PM

if a wish were granted
to me as I stand
gazing
up at the stars
and I could
catch up the glitter
and scatter it worthily
grandly, on the page
so that you could feel
just what my eyes see
how my
my thirsty poet's soul
would dance
but that, as much
as it would
satisfy the need
to ever quest for
perfect words
if wishes were
forthcoming
I would pick another…
my wish you see
as I stand sleepless
in the darkness
is for you and me
hand in hand
the same stars
to see as
they become our
private audience
my world no longer
in need
I could want no more
if you and I
were
we

[This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 06-01-2000).]

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

1 posted 2000-06-01 05:43 PM

Cora, very nice poem you've shared!

Coco

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2000-06-01 06:59 PM

Corazon,

Lovely and heartfelt poem. I hope you get your wish!!!

Lone Wolf

Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2000-06-01 10:24 PM

very romantic
i could see the stars in your eyes
ahhh... to grasp that dream...fantasy is a wonderful thing

i hope all your wishes come true

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2000-06-01 10:34 PM

I wish for you that your wishes be granted. It's a beautiful poem, Corazon........again

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

5 posted 2000-06-02 11:06 AM

yes must agree with the above, beautiful. The dreams we dream and hope for is what keeps us alive.

Parker

Corazon
Senior Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 1209

6 posted 2000-06-02 03:38 PM

am on borrowed cp for just a minute but wanted to say thank you.....you all are great, its the readers that make the poems

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