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rene Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 113 |
What did she suggest? Did you forget why you shouldn't trouble her Taste Eden and neglect the rest Promises are made and kept Does it feel too good to bear? |
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mystery Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 79 |
VERY ORIGINAL! I LIKE THIS BECAUSE IT IS SHORT BUT POWERFUL. I LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE FROM YOU |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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rene Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 113 |
thankyou one and both |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Rene This left me much intrigued and pondering lol. I really liked your expression. Looking forward to reading more from you. In a word this was...powerful  amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." |
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