Little More Would Be The Same (song lyrics, very juvenille....don't bother reading ..

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Little More Would Be The Same (song lyrics, very juvenille....don't bother reading ..

jeffbrowning
New Member

since 2000-05-25

Posts 7
Mobile, AL, USA

0 posted 2000-06-01 09:02 AM

her depth, her innocence
her mind is so intense
the way she captures all my senses with a smile

it's no wonder
i'm going under
but what a way to go and I'll go all the way

when she
meets me in the middle
by the second story window pane
loving me a little
little more would be the same

her smiling pouty lips
her shapely rounded hips
the way her cleavage swells with her push-up bra

no contradiction
forgot to mention
the way she makes me feel when we go all the way

and she
meets me in the middle
by the second story window pane
loving me a little
little more would be the same

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

1 posted 2000-06-01 12:45 PM

To say don't read is foolish
Let the reader decide what is worth reading
found the poem very good and not juvenile.,
Keep up the good work
Let it stand on it's own

jeffbrowning
New Member

since 2000-05-25

Posts 7
Mobile, AL, USA

2 posted 2000-06-01 12:57 PM

I thought telling everyone not to read this would at least double the amount of traffic that actually read it. Now, my dilema, what to tell literal minded poet types. Could occupy my century.....

By the way Spike. Thanks for the support!

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