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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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What muse could render me the verse To catch and captivate your grace? When all the muses stand submersed In awe of you, -- thus I must praise Your charm in silence! With affection, My stunned bewildered stare receive. Don’t ask me to describe perfection, My pen’s not worthy to conceive The needed words. I dare not write-- To strive for the absurd intent And miss the moment of delight Of seeing you. Allow me then, To simply watch with admiration, And utter nothing in ovation. |
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Jana Tovey Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 257USA |
Pretty high praise here. Good poem. I give it a standing ovation. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How I wish I'd written this....or better yet, inspired it....the servant bows to master... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you both! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is excellent, Master. Quite a tribute.... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Indeed! I think this is now my favorite of yours, Master! Denise |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Wow, I enjoyed this.  Short, but excellent. Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you everyone, To tell you the truth, I wasn't sure about this one, but after all of the responses I got I guess that it did come out good... Thanks |
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