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Oh what are yuh afraid of yuh ninny
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Oh what are yuh afraid of yuh ninny |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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I have composed a triumphant letter Though when I go to send I think better Without pause in shame I smack delete One more time my shyness doth defeat There's a scary man I'd like to drop a line And ask him to hear what is on my mind He's not the boogie monster man from lore Sometimes I wonder what I'm scaredy for My peers have told me simply just e-mail Direct to the point and man I cannot fail And wayoutwalt we know you're way out, friend Keep in mind known English 'fore you go to send That kinda made me puff out my pouty lips I'm sure I can write without my way-out quips Just no yuhs no yuhs and I'll do well I guess no yuhs and my story I can tell For the last time the last time I'll be told E-mail the man he has a heart of gold Don't hesitate he is great you mustn't pause Ask your question to the wizard of our oz I followed the yellow brick road all alone The one where good intentions are paved in stone And though my words were flowery swirled They were off to the magic capital of the world When they were read and when they were studied The eyes of the reader must been muddied Because to him they made since very well The day I first contacted Ron Carnell in a canyon in a cavern excavatin for a mine dwelt a miner forty niner and his daughter clemintine!!! yeehaw! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Now, if I may (only concerning the title) as my daughter would say, "duh..?" but I'm glad I took the time to bother. By the way, do you remember the 60's..? Man, I sure wanted to give a lot of them a free piece of my heart as Janis would say. Well, Yuh's put it... Yuh, good..! Oh, by the way I'm not real clear on this "Capital" thing... and who exactly is Carnell..? Lucky |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Delightful, Walt!  Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, Ron has always been good at spotting diamonds in the rough and you got the market cornered on rough, Walt, and fortunately for all of us that know ya, you've got a lot of gems in there, too. Somehow the old Pounderosa wouldn't be the same without ya! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Scince you've posted already...I won't lecture you about how cute this is!!!  Simply YOU is all I can say Walt...and it's wonderful!!!!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yuh scared ninny! Walt you make me laugh! This is really good...so did you send it? Did you get a reply?  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oh nooo not yet this is one of those fantasy poems yuh all true but the happy ending |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Walt - you are definitely Way Out - lol - great lines - I was laughing as I read it - you've got a slant on life that is totally YOU. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i did it i did it and lucky ron carnell created this site and he lives in the magic cap of the world yuh yuh and he is no meanie!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ You are so very unique. What an innocent quality you have about you. Delightfully talented and sincere .. two tremendous qualities, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey Walt - is this the one? I Like! But I guessed...I just knew who you were on about...wizard - lol, indeed! K |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL Walt! This is a good'n. Nothing to be scared of ya ninny hahaha... You do have an outlook all your own. That's what makes you so unique! Wouldn't want ya any other way  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marge has said it all in her response here, Walt, and Balladeer, as well. You are a true diamond, shining brightly, don't ever lose that sense of innocence, either, it is quite charming. Corinne |
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