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sweetea
Junior Member

since 2000-05-30

Posts 12
NE

0 posted 2000-05-30 10:44 PM

This poem is now available in the Adult Forum

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 05-31-2000).]

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

1 posted 2000-05-30 11:06 PM

Im sitting here speachless,

i swear with all my heart that this has been my fantasy for the longest time....

and ive told others that can back me up

and you just matched it with words perfectly

nice entrance

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

2 posted 2000-05-30 11:21 PM

Making love in the rain does lend itself into a very erotic fantasy.
keep your eyes on the weather
and set this fantasy free.
Rich

[This message has been edited by spiked (edited 05-30-2000).]

sweetea
Junior Member

since 2000-05-30

Posts 12
NE

3 posted 2000-05-30 11:38 PM

Thank you Kevin and Spiked for your responses. This is my first attempt at poetry and I was scared to death to submit this and even more terrified to read the replies. I closed my eyes and wrote the words that best described exactly how I pictured this fantasy. I feared it may be a little too explicit after reading the poetry at this sight and am thankful no one has judged me. Thanks again!

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2000-05-30 11:56 PM

I'm sorry, sweetea, but consider yourself judged. I have received comments that the poem goes too far for the Open Forum which many families and children visit every day. I am temporarily moving the poem to the Moderator's Forum where a decision will be reached. The writing is excellent and was done with style. There is certainly no complaint there but the Open Forum may not be the appropriate place for these images. I hope you understand. I would want to do nothing to discourage a poet with your obvious talent from further postings.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2000-05-31 08:54 PM

Thank you, sweetea, for your understanding.

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