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traveling heart Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 26 |
When Will I... Sleep Again Fully and Deeply With my Lovers arms around me With dreams of Happier Days Yet to come... When Will I... Fall in love again I must admit My heart feels such pain at my choices in relationships They are a loss and no gain I realy wonder sometimes Has the world gone insane? When Will I... Discover my dreams Way out as they are... And give myself a chance Perhaps I'll go far When Will I Do These Things? First get some sleep And quit dating creeps Sort out the dreams and develop some schemes Perhaps find a quiet field And let out a shout Cut myself some slack, Eventually I will figure it out |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Your dreams will come true when you expect it least. Give yourself the slack you talk of and everything else should take care of itself. Love usually finds you not the reverse Great poem I like Much |
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traveling heart Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 26 |
Thanks Spiked... I believe you must be a kindred spirit based on the time that you posted your reply... up into the wee hours of the morning - weren't we!!! I appreciate your critique and your advice  )Traveling Heart |
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