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Brandyn Sand
Member

since 2000-04-21

Posts 82
Columbia, SC

0 posted 2000-05-30 08:52 PM

I met you in the darkness
Where twilight touches dreams,
In a place where love existed
As silent sunlit beams.

You were arrayed in midnight;
I was clad in shadows fair.
And only love surrounded us,
For no one else was there.

As your flesh pressed against me,
In the warmth of your embrace,
A "oneness" seized my memory
That time will not erase.

And I strive on until the day
This love will set me free,
When dreams are turned reality
And you are here with me.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-05-30 09:07 PM

Brandyn~
This is simply lusciously tender.
The title grabbed my romantic nature ...
and the content did not let me down.
Wonderful, gentle writing.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-05-31 07:10 AM

I can't believe this didn't have a hundred replies, it speaks to my heart, it's one I can and will read over and over again....

Kathleen
indy31_99@yahoo.com

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-05-31 07:14 AM

I'm glad I didn't miss this one Brandyn! You've expressed this beautifully ... its truly lovely and flows with such gentle romance, wonderful!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

4 posted 2000-06-01 08:33 AM

Hi Brandyn,

This is so beautiful, what a wonderful dream to have. Enjoyed very much, thank you for sharing.

Love, Cerenity

angelsamongus
Member

since 2000-05-27

Posts 70
New York

5 posted 2000-06-01 08:46 AM

~Brandyn~
What a beautiful flowing poem, you have a wonderful way with words. I love the title.
~Lori~

MyPenNameIsSam
Member

since 2000-03-06

Posts 94
usa

6 posted 2000-06-01 12:38 PM

This is beautiful...

Fleeting World
"Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world:
A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream;
A flash of lightning in a summer cloud,
A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream."
-from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

7 posted 2000-06-01 01:00 PM

The title drew me in and the poem carried me off, this is tenderly romantic with wisps of longing and need. You wove a beautiful piece, thank you for sharing it.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2000-06-01 02:34 PM

This is extremely romantic and will most like melt every woman's heart that should ever read it! Well done!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2000-06-01 02:37 PM

What a lovely title...and the whole poem is beautifully romantic. Wonderful writing!

ESP
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

10 posted 2000-06-01 03:05 PM

Gorgeous title!!! And a very lovely, romantic poem too!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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