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Little One.. Kit's challenge
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Little One.. Kit's challenge |
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angelsamongus Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 70New York 
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 I had never written before I lost Erin. This is one of the first things I wrote (that made sense) to her. I was so tired of being so sad so I tried to make it somewhat happy. For Erin Little One Why have you gone? Someday we'll join you It won't be long. Until then, Keep everyone up there on the run Touch the moon, the stars And chase the sun. Play games with grandma and sing a song Let her rock you and hold you Like our hearts long. Give everyone a kiss, and send them our love, and soon we'll see you In Heaven above. Love, Mommy & Daddy Written by Mommy 2-20-96 |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is written with such beauty and such love. I'm so sorry for your loss and the pain that it took to write this. Thank you for sharing. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
you have such courage that i truly admire. i am so glad that you are able to write about this and am honored that you would share it at this forum. i feel we each have much to learn from one another. great poem!! take care amy  "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
*I found this somehow twice Lori, so I copied my reply from your other post ... it is doubly wonderful Lori, this was absolutely lovely! What wonderful words came from such a sad time. I find that this is when I'm so grateful to be able to write, in those sad times, its so therapeutic, almost as if by placing pen to paper, it gives you license to grieve or just feel sad when you want to. It's such a release. Your poem was so touching, thank you so much for sharing this with us. Much appreciation, /Kit |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
This one is so moving it touches my heart in all directions. Honestly it's soooo compelling and thank you for sharing this sweet poem. Coco |
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angelsamongus Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 70New York |
Thank you all for your comments. I am glad you liked it. I still wish I had no reason to wrie these poems.. ~Lori |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is so beautiful and so sad....I am so sorry for your loss. Thank you for honouring us with sharing this poem. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Precious writing...I too believe that I will see my loved ones in heaven. James |
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