Open Poetry #7 |
Loveliness |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Loveliness I wanted to feel your loveliness so I called you up and put in a special request. You told me some soft kisses were waiting for me over there so I headed on over with a few of my own to share. Now we share this warm embrace... I kiss your lips and caress your face. I touch your soft skin and now my heart does race. Loveliness you are such a lovely place. A fresh kiss and as we lock the door me and the woman I adore experience loveliness once more. Jameslee@May29,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 06-03-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
now i dont think i need coffee at all this poem perked me right up |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, this is beautiful! Much shorter then most of your poems and yet you said it all. I am gald you have found your happiness. Marina |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oooohhhhh me loves ya when your "lovely"SBJ this is sweet and romantic... and oh so-- well-- LOVELY very nice james...very!! jm There are places inside our souls ... that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts ... that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A romantic poem! Sometimes just being alone is the best thing for a romance... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks wayoutwalt, Maria, Janet, and PoetdeVine for the wonderful comments. Love and romance can indeed be lovely. James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
James yowsers! this was beautiful hon. i loved it! your romantic side is really showing lately m'friend. take care, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Amy I appreciate your wonderful comments. James |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh James, this one is sweet Loveliness caresses the beauty of the heart Coco |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Coco I appreciate that very much. James |
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