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Please (my favorite poem)
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Please (my favorite poem) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Please me every way you go, Please me with your love, Please, Please me in every way, Because every thing you go, It's pleases me, Everytime you send me flowers, I smiled And think of you, You release me, With your love on my heart, You please me In every way, You please me With your love, I love the way you do, You're only person Who makes me happy , You make me happy In every thing you do, You please me In everything you for me, You please me in everything, You please me, [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 06-10-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Great choice, Vandana, Though I have not read all of your poems, this one definitely stands out to be one of the best from you I have read... Regards, sudhir My heart is pounding, my stomach's inside out I'm feeling kind-a-shaky, my mind is full of doubt All I ever think about, is fearing fear itself, Wish I could unscrew my head and put it on the shelf Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Don't know what I'm looking at, the lights are all too bright My brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor Sweep 'em up. Throw 'em away, don't want 'em anymore Clouds race across the sky, day turns into night, Still there are the questions, no answers in sight Everything is twisted, everything is oh so tight, Starin' out the window, everything is just too bright Brain's about to crumble, spill out on the floor, Wish I could unscrew my head, and kick it out the door... You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange You know I'm feeling kind-a....Strange ~ Strange ~ Joe Satriani (Flying in a Blue Dream) |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice Vandana... one of my favorites of yours also... |
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