Open Poetry #7 |
Why let yourself be cheated on? |
Laura56 New Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 5Oregon |
WHY? After all the times you hurt me, The times you made me cry.. Why do I forgive you with every little sigh? The times you betrayed me, and the times of painful good-byes... Why do I still need you, after all those lies? The times that you ignored me, and the times my pain has shown... Why do I still care for you, though you left me all alone? With the scars you left upon me, and the tears that fall each day.. Why am I still in love with you Though you've treated me this way? |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Not sure anyone can answer this age old question....nice poem. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Laura~ Welcome to Passion's. I enjoyed your poem and especially this line - 'Why do I forgive you with every little sigh?' The heart gives until it can't give anymore ... then, it forgives. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing..I have been in similar situations and still felt love. Love can last a long time and endure quite a bit. James |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
HI Laura56 I understand those bad times but if we can sustain love and understand it's twist and turns and be patient with it I think it can proceed. Above all its sheer bliss if we can be with one whom we've loved all our life. I wish you the best let no one take you for granted. Sincerely A_L |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I've often wondered why women let themselves be abused mentally and physically by a man, and remains in the relationship knowing nothing is going to change. Can anyone explain this to me??? Your poem is well written and expresses a situation that many women face. |
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