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vandana
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0 posted 2000-05-29 07:01 PM



Day and night,
I pray for you,
To come back and take me,
My life would be much happier,
just being with you,
I wish for you,
I wish upon the stars,
Every night,
I stand outside  all night,
Wish on a star,
pray for you
to come back,
I wish for you
It's hard to live without you,
So that's why,
I wish for you,
Iam wishing upon a star for you,
To come back,
I know why they say,
when you're alone
and need someone to lean on,
But still ,
Life goes on,
It's never end,
And If we wish for someone
the will surely come to you,
So that's why,
I keep wishing upon the star,
I wish for you,
every day and night,
I wish for you,

© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Mike
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1 posted 2000-05-29 08:28 PM


May your wishes come true Vandana.. nicely written.  I enjoyed.
Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-05-29 09:14 PM


So sad.....thank you for sharing this with us.  
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-05-29 09:16 PM


VanDana~
Oh, sweetie ... *HUGS* to you.
This is so sweet ... I can feel your
hurt ... I'll wish on a star for you too.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


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CocoBaci
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4 posted 2000-05-29 09:28 PM


Vandana, although a wish is silent and never spoke somehow the feelings are captured and echoed above the skies where angels soar to comfort one as they make their wish at nite.
This poem you've shared reaches out to many a soul

Coco

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5 posted 2000-05-30 03:34 PM


Hi Vandana!
You capture my feelings too well .

Sincerely
A_L

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6 posted 2000-05-30 10:40 PM


"I wish I may, I wish I might
Have the wish I wish tonight... "

Vandana, this was a very heartfelt poem. . . I hope that your wish does indeed come true, but you can't wish forever. . . you must move on sometime. . . and I'm glad that you show that in this poem. . .

Excellent my friend...

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