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You've Just Got A Way About You
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You've Just Got A Way About You |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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You've Just Got A Way About You ~*Marge Tindal*~ What is it about your love, soft and sweet That sweeps me completely off of my feet Phrases sung in passionate tunes of night Rocking me gently 'til morns early light Whispered on song of whipporwill's refrain Returning to me again and again Dreams come folded in delightful slumber Counting of sheep, matters not the number Holding me close when the sun finds the day Waltzing my worries and troubles away Folding me gently in arms so tender I lose myself in sweetest surrender You've just got a way about you, baby That makes me think I've got a chance, maybe ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Oooh Marge....this is exactly how I feel..and you say it with lovely grace and elegance, as always. All of your works are exceptional, and this is no exception.  *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh Marge, this is a beautiful love poem. It's wonderful when we find the person who makes us feel like that. Great poem. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, I gotta find this guy to tell me what his secret is!!! I envy the guy that could make you feel that way, Marge. Nicely written....as always. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, I think this could be put to music and become an instant hit, of course, it is anyway, without the music, just beautiful! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Martie, you're right, what a great song What a great lady who wrote it Beautiful, Marge |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ I think you just have a way about writing all this fine poetry!!! Great work, my friend!! A chance is all we can ever hope for. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was a sweetly romantic spot from you Miss Priss...G* Me thinks you need to show it more often around here!!!  Love ya girl!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
.. folding me gently in arms so tender .. Oh Marge I can sense your surrender (teehee). Such sweet poetry my goodness it's so delightful to read your verses! Coco |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Marge chances are you'll sweep him off his feet, especially if he see's something like this from you. just wonderful Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Marge, this is gorgeous!! loved it. Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
What a beautiful poem!!!! If ya put it to music it would be no 1 in the Top 20 for sure! You are a remarkable poetess...and a wonderful person. Love ya, Marge! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I'm with Martie and ESP Marge! With a little melody behind that ... sing on! Wonderful and romantic! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ I'm glad you like it. What a nice compliment. LoveBug~ I am really pleased you like. Balladeer~ Tee-Hee ! What a guy ! Martie~ Awwwww ! I just *HUG* you ! Lizzie~ Awwwww ! U2 ! LoneWolf~ What a neat line for you to come up with. I appreciate you. Devina~ I'm glad you love the 'romantic' Ms. Priss ! CocoBaci~ How sweet of you to say so. Thank you. Tracie~ Thanks, gal ! DarkAngel~ Glad you found it so. Lil' Lizzie~ I'm really pleased everyone wants to sing this one. Makes me HAPPY ! Kit~ Thank you ... I usually sing as I write so this pleases me. LOVE TO YOU ALL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, I am just simply happy for you my dear, your poetry sings of such perfect love, it really does make you want to SING OUT LOUD its melodys. Love, Cerenity |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, Marge! Denise |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
very nice, hope whoever this was for gives you that chance. seems like you are a very loving and caring soul. good work, like it a lot. P. J. Kotrch carpe diem A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Kinda reminds me of what the spider said to Miss Muffet......... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
It looks to me as if you have a real good chance, Marge. Great poem - full of images and promises... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Thanks, kiddo. I love to write 'happy'. Denise~ Thank you. Good to see you. EPoet~ Thanks, it's for anyone, everyone and the good ones - twice ! BAlladeer~ Are you sure we're not related ??? Whey too cool !  LongJohn~ So good to see you here playing among friends. HI Lorelei ~ Love ya' all - ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Is there room for a little sax in there somewhere Marge?... HUSG |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainbowGirl~ Just for you ... a little sex ! Whoops ! ... S A X, I meant S A X ! Love ya' gal friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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