Open Poetry #7 |
Disk One Track Two |
Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Disk one track two yes that's it Get the pain out in a rush let it go let it go let it go let it go from here Can't sate the need need to think things through through muddy thought smears clouding my mind's eye And funny that - I hold the palette of frustration -yes and ... loss? uuhg loss such an ugly color let it go let it go let it go no - but I just don't want to ... where to now? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Disk Two Track Three. . . What is the color of loss? Some would say that it's a dark blue To reflect the feeling Some would say that it's a black To reflect the heart Some would say that it's red To reflect the anger Some would say that it's grey To reflect the days The color of loss? Take a look at the palette of life That's the color of loss Satiate, the feelings in this poem are such that I could only express them back to you poetically. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Satiate~ Very interesting. I just pushed Replay ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, I've never made it to Track Two 'cause I've been told I have a one-track mind but I thoroughly enjoy this poem and your writing style |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Sven, what can I say? I'm flattered much, at your touching reply. Thank you.. Marge, aww! Thank you M'deer, ! I thoroughly enjoy you! |
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