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When Love Finds You
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When Love Finds You |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
When Love Finds You Some say it is fate That helps you find a mate For that day, we can not wait It is a crazy game… love Finding the one you dream of Who fits you, just like a glove Someone who is so dear To lay to rest your fear And wipe away, your lonely tear No more feeling blue The world is brand new When love, finds you Marina May 2000 |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
12 lines of amazing clarity in thought Marina... I liked this aplenty...particularly, Someone who is so dear To lay to rest your fear And wipe away, your lonely tear Regards, Sudhir Hey you, out there in the cold, Getting lonely, getting old, can you feel me? Hey you, standing in the aisle, With itchy feet and fading smile, can you feel me? Hey you, don't help them to bury the light. Don't give in without a fight. Hey you, out there on your own, Sitting naked by the phone, would you touch me? Hey you, with your ear against the wall, Waiting for someone to call out, would you touch me? Hey you, would you help me to carry the stone? Open your heart, I'm coming home.... by Roger Waters (Pink Floyd) - The Wall |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Love will indeed make us crazy... and it can make us blue. But it is worth every tear when we find love so true. Two hearts become one ... contentment is found. Two sould become one, by love's promises they are bound. perfect poem marina-girl ... we seem to be on the same wavelength once again... maybe we should put and ad in the paper  later poet-gator Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marina, now who's the romantic one? This is just wonderful. . . Couldn't have said it better myself. . . "The world is brand new When love, finds you" Yes it is my friend. . . hope that your world is a brighter place. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
~ So sweet this poem ~ Coco |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marina~ Clearly, the harder one searches the more it eludes. Best to stand still and let it come. Enjoyed the read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
"The world is brand new When love, finds you" Indded it is,  God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sudhir, thank you very much for your compliment. Your support is greatly appreciated. jan, what should our ad read. Wanted.....One good man?? Loved your poem you added. ( show off!!! LOL) Sven, thank you as always. I can always count on you to have such a wonderful sweet compliment. When you find happiness, eveywhere is a brighter place. Coco, thank you Marge, I think you may be right. Sometimes the old saying....seek and you shall find, may not always hold true. Thank you for your post. EagleOne, thanks to you also. I am glad you liked it. Marina |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful...definitely rings with truth. You have wonderful talent, do keep it up! *Krista Knutson* "Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ah, this is a beautiful poem. Yes, it is wonderful when love finds you. Great job. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Here's to a brand new world hon....such a lovely poem. James |
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shilpi Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 73 |
So much is said in those few brilliant lines....very well expressed, Marina !! regards, shilpi |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful indeed Marina Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Alwye, thank you so very much for your compliment. Coming from a poet such as yourself, I am humbled. Lovebug, thank you James, I think we both deserve a drink don't you. Cheers!! shilpi, thank you I am glad you enjoyed it. Dark Angel, thank you |
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