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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
The softest notes of nightingale, ...as gentle breath of dawn, Float in whisper on night's breeze, ...'mid songs of heaven's spawn. How sweet the music of the heart, ...doth echo truer far, Than madrigal's of Muses fair, ...sang from a distant star. Not a harp, nor zephyr heard, ...when dream of scented Rose, But softest note of nightingale, ...as bloom in my heart grows. [This message has been edited by Mike (edited 05-28-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ No one perfumes the rose quite like you do. Simply fragrant with loveliness. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The softest notes of nightingale, ...as gentle breath of dawn, Float in whisper on night's breeze, ...'mid songs of heaven's spawn. ------------ *sigh* this poem is exquisite, a jewel, perfect. take care, jm Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Mike! Denise |
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Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
This is very....how do I put this....gripping maybe. I guess you could say I'm speechless. I don't know how else to reply except "wow" Sincerely, Alina Le Ann |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike--How sweet the music of the heart? Yours with this blossom! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Marge, I oft feel like a wilted petunia amongst roses when I read some of the beauty contained in Passions. Thank you for the gracious comment. Janet Marie... thank you kindly for the exquisite. *smile* Denise... a very lovely from a very lovely lady... can't top that... Alina... you are very kind in your reply, glad you enjoyed. Martie...enjoy a beautiful day today my friend, and let the music of your heart sing forth. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Mike, I can only say that I could listen to your poetic music all day long. It's just so beautiful. This is exquisite Liz |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
The softest notes of nightingale, ...as gentle breath of dawn, Float in whisper on night's breeze, ...'mid songs of heaven's spawn. How sweet the music of the heart, ...doth echo truer far, Than madrigal's of Muses fair, ...sang from a distant star. Not a harp, nor zephyr heard, ...when dream of scented Rose, But softest note of nightingale, ...as bloom in my heart grows. Mike a wonderful poem, beautiful. I can smell the roses through the screen like those scratch and sniff stickers only much better. homer says "ummmm rose fresh" ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Do not listen to a word I say Just listen to what I can keep silent" Nicky Wire |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've penned this beautifully Mike ... your rhythm is superb, absolutely lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Mike, This is excellent work! It is a beautiful picture of love. Your machanics are excellent also. David2  |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I hereby bestow upon thee... the honorary title of.. "King of Roses"... You should write a book on the subject - No one makes a rose rise - rose raise - raise a rose?...like Mike...  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 05-29-2000).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I love your poem very much!!!!!! |
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