Open Poetry #7 |
Love |
Angel`Fox Junior Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 32Ottawa, Ontario Canada |
Love I see the world completely different now Ever since you said those four words to me "I love you Julie" My heart skipped a beat I can't breathe Oh my god, he loves me!! Could this be true? Could you truly love me? I am grateful I have met you For where would my life be? Without your love in me, for me I am so complete now, You my love Are my knight, I treasure, cherish and love you And never want to be apart So lock the door and throw away the key Baby your stuck with me For eternity Even that is not enough time For you and me By Angel`Fox 05-26-2000 at 12:34am @}>*+~^ Angel`Fox ^~+*<{@ {~._.~} _( Y )_ ()~*~() (_)-(_) "Love seeketh not itself to please Nor for itself hath any care, But for another gives its ease, And builds a heaven in hell's despair" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful Angel-fox Je t'aime plus qu'hier et moins que demain." I love you more than yesterday and less than tomorrow (unkown) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow ... he sounds pretty special AngelFox, nicely said. Best wishes, /Kit |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
that is what love is, it is pretty powerful stuff. I think it should come with a warning like: MAY CAUSE YOU TO LOSE ALL SENSE OF REASON MAY CAUSE YOU TO BREAK INTO SONG FOR NO REASON, OR TO CRY OR SMILE EVERYTHING YOU HEAR A CHEESY LOVE SONG. MAY CAUSE YOU TO HAPPY ALL THE TIME treasure, cherish and love you And never want to be apart So lock the door and throw away the key Baby your stuck with me For eternity Even that is not enough time For you and me a lovely poem, sweet. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Do not listen to a word I say Just listen to what I can keep silent" Nicky Wire |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
An Angel with wings of love so wonderful to see, may you fight as high as can be. Love, Cerenity |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
Angel Fox, Yes, love is wonderful! Your poem was very upbeat and moving. I enjoyed it. Thanks, david2 |
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