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Heavensong Haiku |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Starlight, star bright, sing heavens open up and ring under moonlight swing Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
What a sweet thing The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This haiku is a lullaby in itself! Very well written and whimsical! I love how it rhymes. Do write some more for us!  Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, Helmut... Thank you Melissa, I will make every attempt to Haiku when I can! |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
countless heavens have opened under a moonlight swing very lovely Rex |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lizzie, Rex, thanks! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
On seeing sunshine, bats and fireflies do whine, But, the rest of the world seems fine... Moonlight, a reflection of the sun shining somewhere else, Stars, each one is a sun shining from far away, Heaven is full of such lovely fireflies each sending many a ray... Regards, sudhir Life is like a painting, That in an art gallery is left hanging, Though many come just to look at it, A very few actually come to enjoy it. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, thank you, thank you... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
U r welcome, welcome, the pleasure is all mine...really enjoy reading your little haikus... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunshine~ Oh, how I love to read your Haiku. Thanks for sharing, gal friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sunshine, its haiku madness, and your shines very bright under the moon. parker |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Sudhir, Marge, Parker, thank you all for reading and commenting. I keep poking along there, Marge, counting, rhyming...he he! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Ringing laughter Singing soul Swinging gay moods nice one,Sunshine |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, Kaile... |
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