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redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

0 posted 2000-05-28 02:30 AM

The unwashed eyes found the laughing wings.
Their claws aching,
silky.
And silky sex
maddend, thoughtless,
love and laughter
found touch.
Hot and open,
where your hand passing
chills our delicious core.
Blackness pretends to fall in my nighted chair, and on my hour pillow.
One and one
above the stars
cannot light me.

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

1 posted 2000-05-28 05:30 AM

The unwashed eyes found the laughing wings.
Their claws aching,
silky.
And silky sex
maddend, thoughtless,
love and laughter
found touch.
Hot and open,
where your hand passing
chills our delicious core.
Blackness pretends to fall in my nighted chair, and on my hour pillow.
One and one
above the stars
cannot light me.

Oh dark and passionate, an interesting poem.
haunting, enjoyed reading this one. great images.

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2 posted 2000-05-28 10:44 AM

Your use of imagery is what drew me to this poem, though I am not sure what you mean to convey. Nonetheless, I enjoyed this.

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