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Along His Way |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Along His WayHe strides alone, across the meadow's moistened tides Intemperate step recalls a haste to lover's side His mind ensnared, with thoughts of warmth and gifted grace He suddenly bends, and brings me gently near his face With sighs of love, his hands cupped easily round my stem He breathes me deep alive for her smooth and fragrant skin And hastens on, though miles await, refusing rest, To find his love my velvet bloom against his chest  Claire[This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 05-27-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ Your thoughts fall as rose petals across the pages of your life. Lovely, lovely, lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Oh my... |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Miss Marge...I thank you for reading this and for your most becoming response. So glad to know you enjoyed. Mike...*smile* ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So lovely, Claire! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* Claire, I'm running out of words to describe how achingly beautiful your work is getting these days. . . so, I feel that the *sigh* will just have to do for right now. . . Just beautiful my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Martie, thank you...I love your "honeyed clover" piece...THAT is magnificent! Sven, you know...a "sigh" from you is music to my heart...thank you, my friend... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
With sighs of love, his hands cupped easily round my stem He breathes me deep alive for her smooth and fragrant skin And hastens on, though miles await, refusing rest, To find his love my velvet bloom against his chest wow that was beautiful lovely magery especially liked the third stanza. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "Do not listen to a word I say Just listen to what I can keep silent" Nicky Wire |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Breath-taking Claire ... a tantalizing read, I enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Claire, you have a romantic touch like few others....another beautiful poem |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
breathtakingly beautiful. Romantic to the core. Kathleen [email protected] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
breathtakingly beautiful. Romantic to the core. Kathleen [email protected] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Brian, so glad you liked it. Thank you! Kit, I thank you for reading and letting me know you enjoyed this piece. Balladeer, flattery will get you nowhere, dear sir...but you certainly have a knack for it! Thanks for reading this. Kathleen, I appreciate your comments...thank you! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Claire, By any other name you are a rose. Lovely writing as always. Parker |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Parker, I am glad you enjoyed this poem...thank you for such a gracious comment. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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