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Holly
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since 2000-05-12

Posts 127
Arkansas

0 posted 2000-05-27 12:38 PM

-Silence Surrounds Me-

the silence now surrounds me
your passionate eyes are no where to see

those comforting arms I've grown accustom to are now gone
my emotions have crashed from feeling so alive & fullfilled to completely alone

how I miss those precious lips to kiss
and how I long to be wrapped in your quilt of love once again
you filled so many holes in my heart and helped it start to mend

now my mind is stuck in the past
missing, wanting, longing, and wondering how I could have made this last

I long to have you again, to hold, to kiss, to taste, to smell, to completely inhale you into my whole being
but for now the silence surrounds me
my heart now imprisoned--never to be free

I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne

insect
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since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

1 posted 2000-05-27 01:27 AM

Very beautiful poem!
Don't worry someone will
find the key to your heart
and set you free.

~And how I long to be wrapped in your quilt of love once again~
That's just so heart warming.

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

2 posted 2000-05-27 03:43 AM

Holly, you've captured emotions well in this poem you've shared. It made me sigh ..
Coco

brian madden
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ireland

3 posted 2000-05-27 05:53 AM

how I miss those precious lips to kiss
and how I long to be wrapped in your quilt of love once again
you filled so many holes in my heart and helped it start to mend
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It is hard when love goes cold, but hang in there. Maybe the person was not the right one for you. What ever you decide take care and don't let the pain take over your life. a
very emotional poem, thanks for sharing,

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Poet deVine

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4 posted 2000-05-27 09:23 AM

Ah, a very sad poem. I hope the silence ends soon.

Kit McCallum

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5 posted 2000-05-27 09:30 AM

You penned your heart-wrenching emotions well Holly ... a lovely and expressive verse!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Holly
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since 2000-05-12

Posts 127
Arkansas

6 posted 2000-05-27 09:57 AM

Thanks for all the response. It's so nice to bounce things off of you guys.

Poet de Vine-I too hope the slience ends soon.

Coco-thanks for reading and sighing along with me.

Brian-Well maybe he is the right one and just not the correc timing..odd thing. I guess the absense will, in time, tell the truth on this subject. THANKS!

Kit-well it's nice to know someone else has these emotions lately. Sorry you are feeling them too though. Hope it gets better for you also.

Insect-I appreciate the thought of the key..hmmm, maybe someone will. I think it helps if you expose the lock from time to time...LOL.

thanks again,
-Holly

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I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of.
Michel de Montaigne

[This message has been edited by Holly (edited 05-27-2000).]

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