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My True Love
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My True Love |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Playful, witty How exciting how inviting A mysterious romantic All so new and enticing Unprepared and unaware For the feelings we will bare Time and time again We meet, so much to share Strong yet fragile Kind and true Minutes then hours I’m enthralled by you Deepest secrets get revealed Strong emotions kept concealed Messages get longer Feelings get stronger Keeping them hidden Some feelings are forbidden Each other we have found To others we are bound Promises, broken Words of love, spoken Hearts connecting, wanting more Feelings, emotions never felt before True love, soul mates No words to describe Total release Of our feelings inside I love you completely Perhaps life times before And with each passing moment I love you even more. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, the forbidden love when bound to another ... you've shared your emotions well Kat, nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You have captured the feelings so very well, well done! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
What a lovely piece...welcome to Passions Kat.  |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Thanks so much guys. I've only been here for a short time and I'm loving it. Alot of the poems on this site are truly magical and very inspiring. Kat.  |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a beautiful poem kat, lovely. Playful, witty How exciting how inviting A mysterious romantic All so new and enticing Unprepared and unaware For the feelings we will bare Time and time again We meet, so much to share Strong yet fragile Kind and true Minutes then hours I’m enthralled by you ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Beautiful poem kat! What an excellent way to express your feelings for, who must be, a very special person.. GREAT JOB!! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Very beautiful! |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
It's great to share this poem with you and thanks for all the beautiful compliments. Kat |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
A very lovely poem indeed! I'll take it from your lead. A luckier man could not be found. Than whom you've described so profound! Very nice Kat, I look forward to seeing more of your work. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
So sweeeeeeet these verses you write. It's amazing how feelings and emotions put to pencil or ink just seem to flow so eloquently. Coco |
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