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An Angel Falls
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An Angel Falls |
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Bunny Junior Member
since 2000-05-13
Posts 30 |
She was always so bright She was always so pure She was an angel, so what did you do? She started fading, giving a light much more dim I saw her crying, her eyes red and tear stained She was an angel, so what did I do? She started to change into something sad and destroyed She began to fall, into a never-ending darkness This angel was falling too fast, and so hard She was an angel, but what could I do? This angel was stripped of her wings and her light Did we take it from her? Did we stop this angel's flight? I want her to know that I'm sorry, and that I do miss her too She was always so bright, so pure..... She was an angel, so what did WE do? |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Bunny, Good poem, you've left me wondering about this poems meaning. Good poem. |
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Rhavin Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 28 |
Bunny, I loved your poem! I was wondering what inspired you to write it? Very unique, to say the least. Rhavin |
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mark crawford Junior Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 11 |
Hi bunny, Thanks for responding to my poem. I think your poem raises a valuable question: to what extent are we responsible for another's downfall? It's so easy to see someone do something that we know is self-destructive and yet turn our heads and say or do nothing. Maybe by taking your poem to heart we can do better in such a circumstance. Keep writing! Mark |
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