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Our Garden of Love
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Our Garden of Love |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA 
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Our Garden of Love < !signature-->Planted May 22, 1999 By Kelly S. McDonald One year ago You sent a little seed It sparkled through my soul To my heart so in need Embedded there it held on strong Nurtured from above And suddenly it wasn’t long That seed sprouted a bud That bud within my heart Just grew & grew & grew I knew right from the very start That this was something new It bloomed into a rose of yellow ‘Friendship’ is her sweet name Each day she’s nurtured by a fellow The man from which she came ‘Friendship’ the thriving flower Was as happy as could be To see friends all around her Called ‘Sense of Humor’, ‘Kind’ and ‘Honesty’ Next she spotted ‘Caring’ Heard ‘Respect’ say, “She’s a must” And holding hands, in came ‘Sharing’ ‘Acceptance’, ‘Patience’, ‘Wit’ and ‘Trust’ ‘Understanding’ tapped her shoulder And pointed up above There she saw entwined all over A deep red rose called ‘Love’ Now my soul can’t help but soar And a song, my heart does beat You in my life, I’m so much more Together, I feel complete So on this anniversary day Of the growing seed, that you did start I must tell you, you’ll forever stay Deep in the garden of my heart KSM-05/22/00 ~Kellsue Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kelly, Love the garden theme!! This is beautiful and keep those roses blooming!!! They are my favorite. Great writing!!  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
From the title to the last line, this is lovely.....I'm on the lookout for a man with some seeds!  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kelly-- This was perfect in rhyme, meter, and of course wording!! simply beautiful. i loved this one and am going to print it out. thanks so much for sharing! amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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tincan5 Junior Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 33 |
Really wonderful poem!! What a beautiful "theme" you've picked to describe someone so very special in your life. I enjoyed reading it very much |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
From beginning to end, this is an exceptionally well-written and beautifully vivid and descriptive piece! Applause! Wow! It's refreshing to read a piece like this! I love garden themes! What a perfect addition yours is! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Kelly!! I really like this one. . .the garden theme is of course, great. . . and you use it with such wonderful results!! Keeping working in that garden, especially if we get to share in the harvest!!! Great!! ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KellSue~ How in-bloom is your garden. So abundant with the seeds of love. Tended by the sharing of the gardners. Happy Anniversary ! Beautiful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Happy Anniversary ----what a beautiful poem Kelly - such imagery and rhythm hugs ~netswan |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You have a beautiful garden, Kelly! Denise |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Thank you everyone for taking the time to read and post your kind comments!! I had fun writing this one  Come to think of it...I usually have fun though don't I? Thanks again!!!! ~Kelly  ~Kellsue Reflect upon your present blessings-of which every man has many-not on your past misfortunes, of which all men have some. ~Charles Dickens We make a living by what we get, but we make a life by what we give. ~Winston Churchill |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I'm glad I didn't miss this gem Kelly ... this was absolutely lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I loved it!!!!! Kathleen indy31_99@yahoo.com |
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