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Run Away |
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CowBoy New Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 1 |
Run Away I know I did some things, That I should not have done. The worst thing of all, Was to turn away and run. Run away from your love, To the arms of your best friend. Run away from your love, And let your love for me end. If there was any way, For us to make a new start. I wouldn't be so foolish, I'd give you all my heart. I wish I could go back, To when our love began; I wouldn't run away, And let our love end. April 17, 2000 |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ouch! This one hurts deeply Cowboy ... nicely written and moving. I hope you can find peace in this very sad tale ... welcome to Passions! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 05-26-2000).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...a perfect example of how our eyes sometimes take us where our heart shouldn't or doesn't really want to go. James |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
CowBoy~ This must have been an agonizing time for you. But you wrote well from your heart what you feel. Welcome to Passion's place. Hope to read more soon!  ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Check your email for a special message. I look forward to reading more from you. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Hi CowBoy, i must say this is a great first post...hope to read more very soon welcome to passion's All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
CowBoy, Great first post. This must have been a tough time for you. Seems like we never realize what we had until it is too late. I hope that things work out for you. Welcome to Passions!! Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Ouch is right. If we didn't make mistakes, we would never learn. As tough as it is, that's how life's played. You have expressed your self well. Welocme to Passions CowBoy! I look forward to more of your work. ~Sheri |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
CowBoy~ Welcome! This hurts! Great poem on such a painful subject. -SEA |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Hey Cowboy.....Welcome to Passions! Look forward to reading more! Marina |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hi Cowboy... add my welcome to the list... when we learn from our mistakes it helps to make right some of the wrong great writing take care, jm There are places inside our souls ... that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts ... that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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