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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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~Thank You~ Piece by piece you mended me, piece by piece I grew. Oh my little angel,...I wish you only knew. What you have done to save me from, the demons of my past. Oh my little sweetness,...you gathered me so fast. Took my broken heart and soul, kissed them softly with your caring. Oh how can I thank you for the heart you have been sharing. Your smile is that of a thousand hugs, your eyes the light of a storm. Oh to express what you mean to me,...words I just cannot form. It is you my dear that makes each day, a treasure in itself. In you I've found every penny,...that constitutes life's wealth. ~Thank You~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SpitFire~ What lovely thoughts. Made me smile. Thanks for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Oh Spitfire! How sweetly lovely -- beautiful poem - loved the ending! ~netswan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SpitFire, Such Passionate writing, my friend. The end was just perfect!!  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
NO! …. Thank YOU! WoW!! I loved that line…your eyes the light of a storm I can just picture looking into someone's eyes and seeing light flashes. You know when you're looking deep into their eyes. See ya at the top |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Took my broken heart and soul, kissed them softly with your caring. Oh how can I thank you for the heart you have been sharing. --------- wow what a HEARFELT thank you wonderful writing here..very touching take care, jm Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Spitfire, This is lovely, and perectly expressed! Keep up the good work! ~Sheri |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You have found the words I have been searching for, and crafted them so well. Excellent work! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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bad girl New Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 6 |
I can definately relate to this poem...it is very well written. Good job! Bad Girl  |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow,...what can I say?...You guys are great. ~Marge,...glad I could make you smile with my writing as it's usually on the sadder side. Thanks for reading...means lots. ~Netswan,...thank you, thank you for reading and for such kind words of compliment. ~LW,...oh thank you for taking the time, and for the perfect,...wow. ~Insect,...you're too cool. hehe. Thanks for liking,...and sending me up. ~Janet Marie,...thank you so so much, you kind person you. ~Irie,...thank you for reading and for the encouragement. Really,...thanks. ~EagleOne,...well thank you sir for the excellent. ~Bad Girl,...so glad you can relate to having someone so great in your life,..but not the demons of the past part  . Anyway,...thanks for reading. *Peace. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I absolutely adored this SpitFire ... you are surely not lacking for the right words ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
it is amazing the power that a person's words can have when geniune, how they can heal and comfort. A beautiful poem. It is you my dear that makes each day, a treasure in itself. In you I've found every penny,...that constitutes life's wealth. A fantastic piece of wisdom. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Spitfire, Absolutely lovely. ~Lorraine |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Little spitfire~ This made my heart warm as I read it as I know you really need someone like this in your life. What a wonderful way to express your thanks to this person and I do wish you every happiness in life. Keep it up this was very heartfelt to read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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