Open Poetry #7 |
My Lady |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
My Lady I loveth thine hair, and thine skin so fair. I loveth thine eyes, which tell no lies. I loveth thine nose, with it's shining tip, and most of all, I loveth thine lips, for love is spoken there. I loveth the wind, which rustles thine hair, and kisses thine lips. I loveth the sun, which peeks from clouds, giving thee warmth, and lighting thine day. I loveth the trees, that line the walk, and whisper, you've passed their way. I loveth thine person, from head to foot, I loveth thine ways, thine gaze, and all at which thee look. That I might touch that which thee have, that I might hold that, which thee love, that thy might see me, in thine sleep, that thy might love me, just a week. Oh lovely one, of infinite grace, can'st I gaze upon thy face, without the fear of sharp respite, as I confess my love, each day, and night. W. James Beard, Jr. [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 05-26-2000).] |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
James -- where do you find these love poems? I seldom write one, someday, soon I shall write one for fun, but no way as tender as yours are Lovely ~netswan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
James, me thinks that perhaps the spirit of Shakespeare himself hath spoken to thee this night. . . For thou hast penned a wonderfully romantic poem to thy love. . . well done I say sir. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
WOW! Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I Loveth thy poem! AWESOME!!!!I Love Shakespearean style poetry!!!! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 05-25-2000).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thanks for the words folks...this was a stab in the dark...I was watching Robin Hood and it just kinda evolved from there... |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Wow! If this is a stab in the dark, I can only imagine what you come up with when it's not. What a beautiful romantic poem! Kat |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
If there be a fair maiden awaiting your tender advances James, thy words will surely dissolve all resistance ... beautifully written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
James Thous was wonderful, bravo. beautiful. You must have the fairest maiden in all the land. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
"oh lovely one of infinite grace"! sigh!!! How incredibly romantic. I love this poem. It flows like the lovers caress it is meant to be. Thanks James. Ellie< !signature--> 02 [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 05-27-2000).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Reposted in open 9. wjb [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 08-19-2000).] |
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