Open Poetry #7 |
Too Late For Us |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Too Late For Us A wish, a dream, a sigh… teardrops falling from my eyes. Was it yesterday, or today, when first I realized, a yearning, a heart, a sob, a cry… Too late for us, to soon to start again, so fast, so fast, the tears rain from my eyes. W. James Beard, Jr. |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Lovely - sweet and sad - woeful. Well written, JWesley. ~netswan |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
Awwhh... I know too well how it feels when your dreams are dashed... Lovely words to express heart pulling emotions... cyndey |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Hi jwesley, the tears rain from my eyes. Great line. Lovely poem. ~Lorraine |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
jwesley, Oh how sad....bittersweet really. Great lines with the tears. Love the format too. LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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