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she took a lover
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she took a lover |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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to squeeze the loneliness from her arms to pretend it far far away she took a lover tender kisses whet passions long hung out to dry the fever of sensuous caresses burned away the anger the degradation at the hand that matched the ring on her own she took a lover to her breasts suckling forth a love that lived never before eroticelectricity charged encircled within loving arms disappointments disappear and for moments for hours it was easy to not think to let slide what should be and what shouldn’t she took a lover… |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
hey! sounds like a great idea! hehe as always, well written with excellent imagery and verbiage |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corazon, Almost like taking an asprin. Enjoyed the read. *L* |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
lets see, *weighing it out in her mind*...hmmm an asprin...or a lover....hmmmm both relieve pain....one is much more pleasurable than the other...but much more trouble too....hmmmm this might take some thought *g* thanks you two for the read....and the compliments  |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Corozon - Wow! Well - sometimes, in life these things happen - better to be loved then to shrivel up into bitterness. Lovely Poem ~netswan |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"within loving arms disappointments disappear and for moments for hours it was easy to not think to let slide what should be and what shouldn’t" Ah, don't we all long for those moments to never end. Wonderful read. Have enjoyed most everything of yours I've read and think I have read most. jwesley |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Cora, truly a great reading The opening verse grapsed me..to squeeze the lonliness from her arms !! Thanks for the sharing Coco |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corazon~ Very, very enjoyable read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
C, Very good. The weird thing about sex is it's both pleasurable and abusive, slowly making you a shell if there's nothing involved but the heat (and moisture) of it. Well, goodnight! Mike |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks marge b-yep, I know its a fine line, I don't think I have jumped over it enought to be a shell, yet, but surely my toes have smudged the edges thanks for the read my friend |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent poem, Corazon! You surely do have a way with words! Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
That would be one lucky fella, Corazon, and, then again, maybe not. To have you but not have you could be a very bittersweet experience. The poem is loverly  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
electrofied this poem is i like i like! |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
I can relate. Beautiful poem. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
one last thank you before I have to leave for 4 days....denise, walt, kat, thanks much...and bal, that is a sweet thing to say, thank you kindly sir |
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