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mitymopr
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since 2000-05-24
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0 posted 2000-05-24 02:05 AM


We met last year
at a party
we all drank a few too many beers
then you left
I haven't seen you since
every second since then
you've been in my thought's
Friday night is my chance
maybe it's our time
what to do, what to say
I'll take it day by day




 

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insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

1 posted 2000-05-24 06:52 PM


Maybe Jackie's cousin is thinking
the same thing!
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-05-24 07:06 PM


I enjoyed the style and content of this poem..have a good Friday.   James
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-05-24 08:31 PM


~Oh Insect is SO right!!!  What if Jackie's cousin IS thinking the same???...oh how lovely a thought.  Nice little poem here my friend. *Peace.
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