Open Poetry #7 |
Times Change |
Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
It's time to move on you've been idle too long today is a good day you have to be strong. You will make a new friend with whom to enjoy the days to bring back the laughter and help get through the maze. Like a team we will work together to comfort and support be there for one another. So get on with the new it will feel strange but in the end we all have to change. ~Lorraine~ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written, enjoyed your poem. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lorraine-- a lot of poetic insight captured in this one! sounds like you write from experience. look forward to reading more from you! nice poem! take care, amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Wonderful Wisdom, Lorraine. Enjoyed this poem. Thanks ~netswan |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very true, Lorraine! I enjoyed this! Denise |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
ah, this poem helped me out with a little problem I was having in life. Thank you Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Thank you everybody. I really appreciate all your comments. To Lucius Cade, so glad to be of help. ~Lorraine~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh...such a nice poem about change..sometimes hard to do...but very essential. James |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Like a team we will work together to comfort and support be there for one another. So get on with the new it will feel strange but in the end we all have to change. Well said, though I don't know if we change as people ( that much anyway ) I prefer to think of it as growing, learning from life. But I am just waffling on here. anyway, enjoyed your poem. It sounds like a good guide line on how to live each day. today is a good day you have to be strong. You will make a new friend with whom to enjoy the days to bring back the laughter and help get through the maze. we will work together to comfort and support be there for one another. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hmm, change is good it opens doors to possibilities one may explore. This poem you write is quite uplifting in spirit and in heart the way you've expressed it I really enjoy reading it. I sense, I'll come back and read it again and again! Coco |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Hiya James. Your right. Sometimes very hard to do...but necessary. Thank you. ~Lorraine |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Hi brian, I prefer to think of it as, you grow, you learn, you change. That's life. Hey, can I brorrow waffling. Too cool!! ~lorraine |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
Hi Coco, Thank you Coco, you are endearing. ~Lorraine |
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