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Open Poetry #7
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svtcobra
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since 2000-05-23
Posts 14
Syracuse,NY USA
0 posted 2000-05-24 01:47 AM

How many times can it happen
How can two people connect like this
How heavy my heart is
How radiant your eyes are
How light my steps now are
How close can we get
How can you belong to someone else
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Irie
Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
1 posted 2000-05-24 01:50 AM

Ooo Ouch! This one hurts. I know where you're
coming from. Been there my friend!
What a powerful poem in such short words.
Well Done.  
A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2000-05-24 01:53 AM

WOW! This was perfect! Short but straight to the point!  
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