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svtcobra
Junior Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 14
Syracuse,NY USA

0 posted 2000-05-24 01:49 AM


The world turns round and round
do the kindred exist
are we alone
Do we need others
is there hope
are u there
3 ****ing thirty
with someone else
do u think of me
when intimate
does it matter
all i know
is that
he is lucky

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Irie
Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
1 posted 2000-05-24 01:55 AM


Well, so far I have read two fo you poems now and it
seems that you have fallen for someone that is already taken.
I'm sorry for your pain. Your agony is just like someone else I know!
Chin up, you never know how things will work out!

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