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The Missing Whole |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
The Void is there Ever pressing around The center of my heart Long ago frozen But the Thaw has come Yet, I still feel Numb. Will I ever feel complete? Shall I ever find The other half of me? Will I forever walk the Earth One half of a Missing Whole? [This message has been edited by Cyndey (edited 05-23-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice! I hope you find the other half! Denise |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
glad you enjoyed reading the poem ... Hopefully I'll find that missing part sooner or later  Thanks Denise~ Cyndey |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
I hope you find what your looking for. very well expressed Rich |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
nice poem...hang in there! |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Cyndey- My dear friend..I feel your pain on this one too! Since I too, would love to find my missing whole. Sometimes we think we have and then find out the painful truth later on. Great poem! You always surprise me. -Holly |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
Rich ~ Mystical~ Thanks for the encouragement, and for enjoying the read Holly~ Well, You know I try not to surprise you too often~ But when you surprise me I'll surprise you! lol Thanks my amiga~ Cyndey |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I can definitely relate to your poem, you described it perfectly, great poem. The Void is there Ever pressing around The center of my heart Long ago frozen But the Thaw has come Yet, I still feel Numb. ------------------------ "Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too? " Douglas Adams. "Here chewing your tail is joy" Richey Edwards "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nicely put! Don't believe I've read any of your work yet...be asured, thought, I'll be doing so from now on. jwesley |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
Brian~ I'm glad you liked the poem, however if you are able to relate to the feelings there I hope you too find your other half... to fill in the void... JWesley~ I also haven't read any of your work but I'll definately be on the look out from here out!  Thanks guys! Cyndey |
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