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-My Beautiful Storm-
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-My Beautiful Storm- |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas 
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-My Beautiful Storm- like a beautiful storm you blew into my heart of stone thoughts of you running through my mind, taking away the feelings of being alone you've opened my eyes to so much, you've given me back that passionate rush how I've missed that feeling in my world, how I wanted so much to be just yours facing the truth of never having you in my arms again, I start clinging to you as my friend knowing this storm has to come to an end, I realize my worst fear...the loss of my lover and my friend oh how I will always love that beautiful storm that blew into my heart....even while it rips me apart |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Beautiful poem, you've opened my eyes to so much, you've given me back that passionate rush how I've missed that feeling in my world, I love that part I can relate. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Excellent description here, short and so full of emotion and turmoil. Wow! oh how I will always love that beautiful storm that blew into my heart....even while it rips me apart -------------------------------- This line especially hits home...beautifully expressed Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
Holly... I know how and understand these feelings you've managed to express so eloquently. such a beautiful poem, very fluid, very raw and heart rending... You know if you ever need to talk I'm there.. Cyndey |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Wonderful poem... "knowing this storm has to come to an end, i realize my worst fear...the loss of my lover and my friend" Been there... Hope to never have to go through it again... |
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