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Night's Pallid Hush. . . (Thanks to Nan)
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Night's Pallid Hush. . . (Thanks to Nan) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Night's pallid hush ascends with gentle grace Casting its soft, delicate glow over my love's gentle face The star's quiet candlelight fills the night sky And whispering on night's gentle wind, that crystalline sigh Hand caresses your face with the moonlight Loving your smile and making your eyes sing with delight The stars reflecting like diamonds in your eyes Your gentle, caring, beauty lovelier than the open skies Our lips meet in passions touching spirit The beating of our hearts fills the night, can you hear it? Our eyes meet in that one glance So glad that on this night, we've gotten this one chance Night's pallid hush ascends with gentle grace Casting its soft, delicate glow over my love's gentle face The star's quiet candlelight fills the night sky And whispering on night's gentle wind, that crystalline sigh --------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Dear Sven, a most enchanting account of such a magical encounter. Your words brought me directly into the moment of which you spoke, and it was lovely beyond any that I might conjure... Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
So romantic...as ever Sven!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Just oh, so pretty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sven, I'm totally honored that you liked this line... You've done a wonderful job with it - totally different from my sonnet.. That's awesome... I should feed you the lines one at a time and see what you come up with..  Nah - I'll show you the sonnet now.. hehe.. Dawn's Sonnet |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
((Sigh)) Night's pallid hush ascends with gentle grace Casting it's soft, delicate glow over my love's gentle face The star's quiet candlelight fills the night sky And whispering on night's gentle wind, that crystalline sigh another ((sigh)) just beautiful Sven Takes my breath away. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This was truly beautiful. I loved the soft flow as the whole poem just seem to dance in the breeze. Marina |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So romantic and beautiful it was almost mystical!! I bow before the king yet again!!  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
you do have a way with words.it's a beautiful poem We are all poets, its just some people dont know it yet. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Night's pallid hush ascends with gentle grace Casting its soft, delicate glow over my love's gentle face The star's quiet candlelight fills the night sky And whispering on night's gentle wind, that crystalline sigh Hand caresses your face with the moonlight Loving your smile and making your eyes sing with delight The stars reflecting like diamonds in your eyes Your gentle, caring, beauty lovelier than the open skies ----------------- Sven, this is exceptional and exquisite. took my breath away... you do that a lot ya know *smile*  that must mean your a poet huh? INDEED IT DOES!!! wonderful writing my poetic pal. later sweet-sven-gator jm Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding-remain the most beautiful words ever heard. ~Janet Marie~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all so much for your replies. . . they mean a lot to me. . . and thanks again Nan for the line. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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